Haunted Memories

October 14, 2011
By ElenaP SILVER, Phx, Arizona
ElenaP SILVER, Phx, Arizona
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I found Heather’s article, “Haunted Memories” extremly moving. “I opened my eyes and peered into the black orbs of Santan himself,” was the line that got me. I was amazed by it. When kids loose their parents they have such sorrow that torments them. “Now her skin was sickly green, a flaking, revealing and ugly black underneath,” is a great line that lets readers imagine what she is looking at. The words fill my head and my mind travels to where she is and I feel like I am her. Thank you, Heather for this amazing article.

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