The Last Time I Cried

January 24, 2018
By miabeiher11 BRONZE, Defiance , Ohio
miabeiher11 BRONZE, Defiance , Ohio
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the writing titled  “The Last Time I Cried,” written by Leah C., talks about when she cried herself to sleep. Her writing left me feeling sad.


I really enjoyed reading this article. I enjoyed it because I can relate to it. I am not surprised someone wrote about this because everyone has nights that aren’t the best. This article is written well by staying on topic and expressing all her emotions throughout it. I enjoyed when the author says, “So I begged, /Whoever was listening,/ let me feel.” I like the quote because it shows that she would do anything just to feel something.  I also enjoyed when the author said, “I cried for house/ And wished I could go back to/ Not feeling.” I like this quote because it shows that sometimes felling hurts more than not feeling anything at all.



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