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Response to Seasons In Haiku

This poem is very descriptive and concise and gives the seasons name as more of an adjective in each stanza. I feel like this poem has a lot of detailed imagery and makes you feel the season that the author is talking about. It talks about each poem in a friendly warm way or a cold aggressive way which makes it stand out from others. Not only this but it is different from other poems because it is a series of stanzas and each one leads to the next but also stands alone.


I feel the power of these poems like when it says “Heat burning soft skin”, it makes me feel like i'm in the poem. Not only this but it includes lines like “ Gone are steam-filled days”, which really made me better understand the gone of the last season and how the transition of each poem each season.






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