A Stupid Mistake

September 12, 2016

In the writing titiled, "A Stupid Mistake," written by Samantha H., made me feel very conserned and shocked.  Her writing about a time her boyfriend was drunk and they got into a crash left me feeling very open-minded and aware about who I get into the car with.  I loved this piece because it opens your mind about who you get intot he car with, and how everything can change in a matter of seconds.  Some of my family members and friends have been in accidents, but thankfully none of them were killed.  I think this piece was written perfectly.  I think when Samantha said, "This officer ignited a change in my life," was a very strong point.  He kept her peaceful and clam while this was all happening.  

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