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Walking On Eggshells is a memoir told from Sarah's point of view. I thought that this was an amazing piece. It was well written and many readers can also relate to the subject matter. Unfortunately in the world we live in, suicide occurs daily. I like this piece so much because it is so universal and while I have not experienced this first hand, many readers and others can relate to the topic loosely.

One thing this piece did well was hook me in. I wouldn't have thought the piece would flow into a serious subject matter due to the fact that the beginning was a lot more lighthearted than the rest of the piece. It was full of wonderful visuals and it conveyed a great message: suicide is never the answer. You are never alone.




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