I am writing feedback on the piece "Broken" by Fizza Ali. The piece talks about how beautiful the sunset is . The author talks about how  she/he loves the sunset so much that they cry. This piece captures a lot of meaning in just a few lines.

  I feel like every person has done this once in their life, cried to something beautiful, at least I know I have. Some things are worth crying for. I really love the line " My vision blurred as a drop of salty water traced its way along my cheek..." It really shows us how the narrator is feeling about such a thing of beauty. The piece did a great job at showing us how beautiful things can sometimes be.