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Feedback to Handwritten

February 3, 2016
By mustafahayder2002 SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
mustafahayder2002 SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm not perfect; no one is perfect. Everyone makes mistakes. I think you try to learn from those mistakes."




















~Derek Jeter


Brianna Banful's Handwritten is a well-written review on music by the artist, Shawn Mendes. Brianna explains why this album is a must-have album for muslic lovers. She uses many descriptive words, such as clapping, stomping, strumming, and banging, gives the reader a sense of what the music is like. She gives what she likes and isn't afraid to tell us what she doesn't.

Brianna has some background information on Mendes' career. I felt like she did a nice job on explaining about his life, but she could've omitted that informatiion and this piece would have been okay anyways. Other than that, this review is well-written and is a convincing way to make someone buy this album.



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