The “Star Wars: The Force Awakens review   by Aylinde Roberts was I believe an excellent review. You were able to very accurately describe the movie and why you liked it. Often when people write reviews they forget to back up their article with actual facts. They just state their opinion as fact. Aylinde did a great job at actually putting reasons.
Another thing the author did that was good was include negatives. It lets the reader know that you didn’t think the movie was some perfect movie. It also makes you seem more credible. The fact that you’re able to say anything negative about the movie even if it’s a couple of minor mistakes makes you seem like I real person. Its make me want to trust you.