Feedback: First Kiss

February 17, 2009
By Anonymous

I think this is a very interesting and funny story. However, I find it kind of weird how they are a couple and they have to use childish things like betting to get each other to do things. I think that they should just be able to ask them to do it, and just tell each other the truth. They should be able to say that it is their first time and they are nervous about it. It just makes me laugh reading about how they get each other to do things like that.

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