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Feedback for Escape

October 7, 2015
By SnowflakeStar GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
SnowflakeStar GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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   "Escape" by Jayde French in an enjoyable fiction piece about being trapped in a game. Not only is it just simply one person that is trapped here, it is twelve people. These twelve perole are now stuck in this death trap they call a game. To make matters worse, there doesn't seem to be a way to escape, and now it is only down to one person left alive.

   This story is catorgorized as fiction, but what makes it so vivid is the way that the details are so descriptive. For example the author writes "I cough up blood. His claws dig deep into my back, into my organs and lungs, breaking ribs as he presses into me and drags me backwards." From these details, it is easy to picture this descriptive scene. Although this isn't a sentimental story about reality it is good to read in some spare time.



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