"Surprise Visit" by Marisah Croakman poetically provided a real life metaphor. The poem is about how someone who is trying to help is actually the one who has to take on the pure burden. The author conveys these ideas through many different ways, including using figurative language and other things. Marisah's piece was amazing.

      She had a consistent amount great poetic language. For example, she used multiple metaphors. She compares a person to broken glass and a chipped windshield. She also poetically conveys the idea that people who try to comfort will actually hold the whole burden. Marisah had a great piece.