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Feedback for "Winter" MAG

January 30, 2009
By Mary Haugen BRONZE, Monticello, Illinois
Mary Haugen BRONZE, Monticello, Illinois
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“Winter” by Kaily D. is a very detailed poem about someone walking home after school in the snow. The author is happy while watching the grayness of the sky finally “raining feathers down like a cloud.”

This poet found an incredibly interesting way to say that it started to snow. I love the first snow every year, so I can only imagine what it was like for her, a California girl who rarely sees snow. Watching snow fall is a heart-warming moment that makes me happy. This is a beautiful poem that applauds the magic of the season.


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