After reading the article, I noticed that the author followed every single rule that I had made. I, as a reader, was able to stay interested because it was current, it affected a large number of people because there were thousands at the concert, it took place close to home, the article was about famous musicians, it included the 5 Ws and H, it included specific people at the same time of staying impartial, it included quotes, it was short and interesting, gave me a sense of finality when i was done reading it, and everything was grammatically correct. I think this article was put together very nicely.