October 22, 2008
By Jessica Ochoa, Phoenix, AZ

For some reason, Corinne E., knows exactly how I feel about the boy I'm falling in love with, when she wrote "Today." In the poem it reads, I almost took my mask off, almost. When I look and him I want to tell him exactly how I feel, but I don't and I reget it everytime. And he laughs and his gorgeous face makes my heart melt yet at the same time cry, Because I love him so much and he doesn't even know that it kills me that he's not mine. At the end of the day I dream of him but all know is that I can't have him. And I will forever have a broken heart. Corrine, you have no idea how much I would like to thank you for writing this poem, so I can finally put my heart where my mouth is and spill my love out to him. (I hope.) but thank you, you've just change a life forever.

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T!nkerb3ll15 said...
on Dec. 19 2008 at 1:02 pm
i don't know when i read this poem it just struck me the whole time i was reading it i was like omg i know how you yea it was a really great poem

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