I found Rachel Vosejpk's article "Kidnapped" very imaginative. I love the way you use imagery to describe your awful time out in the mountains. However, I don't like the idea of the article. I mean, you seem to be describing all he bad, but no good. You just are a negative person. You must've smiled at least once or twice. Describe those times, not how you tend to a fire, rationalize you're food, or you forgetting what you look like. Come on, don't be an overdramatic girl. I really like your writing though, so thank you Rachel, for your excellent writing.
April 11, 2008