The PHL

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I thought this was a well put together story by Marc. One of the reasons why I liked this poem so much is because I play hockey and I can relate to the anger of frustration the made the teams fight. I think that it was the right thing to be the first one to help the kid out even though you weren't on the kids team. I like the amount of detail was put into the story.
I like how Marc says what all of his teammates names are and how their names relate to what they can do like magician is a good shot.





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