February 10, 2013
By CindyWooHoo SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
CindyWooHoo SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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Kimberly tells a sorrowful story about her a personal experience in Good-Bye. She hopes to let people see what love really takes in the end. Using excellent writing skills, she descriptively portrayed the pain of losing a first love.I admire Kimberly for the courage to write on a true account. I am glad she chose writing to gain closure as of while most people would rather keep it to themselves. Kimberly's work felt amazingly real to me. Although I have never experienced a break up, I felt with Kimberly. I felt the hatred, anger, and sorrow for her first love. This was a touching piece I would like to thank Kimberly for.

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