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September 13, 2012
By rptnk10 BRONZE, Monticello, Illinois
rptnk10 BRONZE, Monticello, Illinois
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i have no idea lol


Alexis Denk’s poem, “Sister’s”, was wonderful. I am from a family with a lot of people in it. I have 2 brothers and we are best friends by choice. Knowing I’m not the only one that’s best friends with my brothers or sisters is a relief to me. Like in the poem she’s best friends with her sister. My brothers and I are family for life and I love that.
Alexis’s poem, I think is a wonderful poem because it relates to my life. I love how it says ,”related by chance”, and I Love how my brothers and I are related by chance to and also how we are best friends by choice. We will always be brothers and sisters for the rest of our life.
This poem made me not feel so embarrassed that I’m best friends with my brothers. It made me feel good to know other people are best friends with their siblings to. I give Alexis Denk’s poem my highest thought and feeling about this poem; I love this poem and think Alexis did an outstanding job writing it. I think Alexis should write more poems. She’s a great poet.



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rptnk10 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 11 2012 at 9:34 pm
rptnk10 BRONZE, Monticello, Illinois
4 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have no idea lol

Thanks yeah I love my brothers and sisters and I hope one day I can be posted in teen ink magazine

rptnk10 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 11 2012 at 9:34 pm
rptnk10 BRONZE, Monticello, Illinois
4 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have no idea lol

Thanks and I think we should all be best friends with are siblings I hope one day I will get posted in the teen ink magazine

on Oct. 11 2012 at 9:30 pm
Lil_Mzz_Sunshine, Sangre Grande, Other
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Life is too short to just let it pass you by, so live your life to the fullest and have no REGRETS!!!

i love this sooo much and i really think we all should be BEST FRIENDS with our sibilings nice one!!!

rptnk10 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 10 2012 at 11:31 pm
rptnk10 BRONZE, Monticello, Illinois
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i have no idea lol

I love this feedback piece lol


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