About "Monday Dawns"

September 27, 2011
By mccca16 BRONZE, Monticello, Illinois
mccca16 BRONZE, Monticello, Illinois
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Caroline T’s “Monday Dawns” was about, well…Monday. It was about waking up Monday morning and having to go to school after the weekend. It was about school transforming you into the next generation of “rats”, or young adults, and as you get older the more you know this transformation is happening whether you like it or not.

I liked this article. I liked how vivid the author’s verbs were. I enjoyed how descriptive and detailed the whole piece was throughout. But most of all, I liked how it sounds just like my Monday morning. I will say this, I, like most people I know, hate Mondays.

Caroline, you are overall a great writer and I think you need to keep writing. I would love to read more articles from you and if you want, I could see you, along with most other authors in this magazine, having a career in writing. Keep it up!

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