November 11, 2009
By DGKallday BRONZE, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
DGKallday BRONZE, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
No-one cares.

This poem was very interesting. Two people who liked each other and then fell out of love. I personally think it was about her real life experience. But it was a bit heartwarming. Two people, one makes a promise that they will be together forever, and then the other person says they lied. And how they can’t be together without out causing pain. Extraordinary. It rhymes exquisitely.

The author's comments:
This poem showed me that love might not be forever.

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