Feedback-She Has Cancer

November 11, 2009
By KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
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This article was written almost as a journal entry, and it’s really heartbreaking, because this girl is talking about how her mother has cancer, and to her, it seems like no body really cares. She’s almost angry because the people that bring gifts to her family don’t realize that the gifts, flowers, and food baskets aren’t going to cure the cancer. This article really grabbed my attention because my mother had cancer but survived it, so I really feel the pain that’s coming from the writer.


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on Nov. 22 2009 at 8:32 pm
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
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Thanks Thandiwe.. it just hit me as a great article.. and it reminds me of personal expirences

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 4:06 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
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wow, this is deep


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