Shark Dive

October 13, 2009
By P-Robs BRONZE, Oak Bluffs, Massachusetts
P-Robs BRONZE, Oak Bluffs, Massachusetts
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Marisa Purdy’s article “Shark Dive” has amazing detail. It was about a trip she took where she was shark diving in the Galapagos Islands. It made me feel like I was there watching the sharks tear the fish apart. It also made me wonder what kind of emotion was she feeling at that moment, if it were me I would have been excited and totally freaked! My favorite line in the article is “IT’S A TIGER!” I like the line because it said what kind of shark it was, because I thought it was a big fish. Also, I like the way you say where you were.

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