On the Border

October 9, 2009
I really found this poem by Melissa U. interesting because it is a short poem, but at the same time, much is left unsaid. I feel as if the poem is a mystery. I like how Melissa says “On the border between Good and possibly Better,” as if her choice will change her life forever. She says it as if possibly Better could or could not be a good thing. She says it as if her going to Good is a 100% chance of greatness, but possibly Better could turn out to be good or bad. Over all I feel that “On the Border” is a good poem

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