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September 23, 2009
By keith little BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
keith little BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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A big round of applause for Raven Dunstan for his article. Dear freshman, it is true that freshman think school is difficult because I did not know anyone from this school. So I had to make friends, some people gave me dirty looks like what a freshman, he just got out of middle school. When I was talking to my friends I had the teacher come up to me and ask if I wanted to be selected as a president for my school class. Once they started voting for me my name became popular around the school because I was kind to other people. Thank you for sharing your stoy, Raven Dunstan.

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This article has 2 comments.

raven1694 said...
on Nov. 28 2009 at 12:45 pm
Thank you so much.

I wrote this article.

It means so much to me that others could relate to this article.

Thanks for the feedback!

raven1694 said...
on Nov. 28 2009 at 12:44 pm

but raven dunstan is a girl :)


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