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September 23, 2009
By Arlyn BRONZE, Phx, Arizona
Arlyn BRONZE, Phx, Arizona
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Reading Christine H.'s poem,"Everything I do + one mistake = yelling and no thanks" literaly made my jaw drop. Astonished would be the best word to describe my reaction. In "Everything I do + one mistake = yelling and no thanks", Christine allows her emotions to flow through her poem. I understand how at the age of 16, taking you'r parent's responsibility could be very stressing + unfair; especialy when you are depended on too much and making one simple mistake wins you yelling and no thanks. There are many people who can relate to this, including me, and I would like to say, thenk you Christine, thank you for your braveness and sharing your feelings, allowing other young people to follow your steps.

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