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April 22, 2009
By VampireFreak BRONZE, Glendale, Arizona
VampireFreak BRONZE, Glendale, Arizona
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Thank you, Kirsten W. You have successfully, and quite humorously, declared what is on everyone’s mind when attempting to get on the Internet.

In a lot of ways, Windows Internet Explorer is like an outgrown boyfriend – a lot of problems and zero excuses. It was hilarious and, best of all, it was so original and inventive. The delivery was excellent! I was amazed at how gracefully this piece was put together.

I loved when you wrote about how Explorer was so cruel and unfair because it refused to give you access to the most important things the Internet offers: e-mail and MySpace. But my favorite part had to be the postscript. That was pure comedy.

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