November 26, 2010
By MikaylaToffler BRONZE, New York, New York
MikaylaToffler BRONZE, New York, New York
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The cold looking porcelain glints and shines like the white white walls and the room is a blur of bright light reflecting and bouncing back and forth. The walls become indistinct and I can’t tell them apart. The room swirls and comes together as one big cloud of shiny white blinding light as seemingly almighty voices whisper and call to me. My pale hand rises and it too becomes indistinct and I can’t tell it apart from the brilliant walls. But I do see the red red red red red. My nails are bitten and red red and bleeding and my fingers are raw and red red from their many journeys down down down the dark opening on my face and from my teeth instinctively biting trying to keep them back, away.

But what I want is more powerful more mighty--more important than what my instincts tell me to do. I shake back and forth and rub my knees on the hard tile floor whenever I do this. I don’t care that the skin on my knees is nothing but a pattern of scar, freshly torn skin, scar. I don’t care. All I care is that my hand my fingers lift and travel and my insides rumble and my body jolts forward and I close my eyes and I rub my knees back and forth back and forth, and I feel it coming and it’s warm. I lean over what I predict is the glinting shiny porcelain. I let out all my anger frustration disappointment jealousy.

I hear a scream and it’s not me. I wipe my mouth and see my mom in the bathroom doorway and she’s crying and screaming crying and screaming and begging me to please stop I’m too skinny. But I’m not, I’m fat I know I’m fat and where is my ribcage and why can’t you see it and why can’t you see more bone on my fat fat body? Where is the beloved bone the bone the bone? I’m fat and it’s almost summer and that means beach pool water bikinis bodies, gorgeous skinny bony model bodies. My hipbones don’t compare to their ribcages but no one understands. So I stand up and disregard my mother’s piercing screams and tear streaked face and the black black bags under her soulful eyes and shove her shove her with all my might out of the room and slam the door. Slam it hard so she knows not to interrupt me.

An eerie silence takes over the room. I, once again, kneel.

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Nozulai BRONZE said...
on Jan. 29 2011 at 11:01 pm
Nozulai BRONZE, New York, New York
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ahmazing ;)

on Dec. 29 2010 at 4:49 pm
tokyogirl989 BRONZE, New York, New York
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OMG mikayla

this is amazing. i always knew you were an amazing writer. this is... wow. i cant say it without being repetitive. keep writing. no matter what Ms. Jacks grades you. this is amazing.

on Dec. 26 2010 at 1:36 pm
MikaylaToffler BRONZE, New York, New York
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haha thanks but its not about me. I was just intrigued by the whole world of eating disorders

on Dec. 26 2010 at 1:14 pm
IsobelFree DIAMOND, Hamilton, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"As long as there is open road, the familiar has the most formidable competitor." - Anonymous

That was incredible. Great use of repetition and language. I'm praying for your recovery <3

reenay_95 GOLD said...
on Dec. 24 2010 at 11:32 pm
reenay_95 GOLD, West Lafayette, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
You can't see the stars if you are always looking down.

Oh my gosh, this was eerie, but so well written. I liked the use of repetition. You sounded a little like Laurie Halse Anderson. Loved it.

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