the magic mirror

February 8, 2010
By , west wendover, NV
there always was a day were i wanted to feel happy in my own skin

but i didnt

i never will

everyday i look at my self look and notice all the things i dont like



my thighs


i always wondered why.. why do illok like this..why ..why..mmmeee
i started telling my friends.
they said i should start taking this pill,these people can give u some if u like thats wat they told me.
so i guessed they were right. i took 1 pill a meal but i didnt each much so i took 3 pills a day.-i had taken it 3 weeks-
i started feeling weird one day. until i went to the bathroom

i fainted i was lying there thats wat they told me.-the school nurse-
she said i had been ther for about 2.5 hours.they saw my toes and fingers turning blue.
my hand was bruised from the fall. they rushed me to the hospital
they called my mom............
then the really bad news came, they told my mom i had an overdose, and
my stomach had rare cancer like symtoms. my mom came to
the room and started screaming. but them she started praying for my health.
2 weeks later,,, my doctor told my mom the symtoms had gone away and i was ok to go

from that day on iv been home schooled and very over-proteced

but yet i still look in the mirror

but i realize

all the great things i have

and that cant be replaced.....

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Ellie_Michelle said...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 6:11 pm
Well regardless of those things mentioned about spelling and punctuation, I really liked this piece.  :)  Thank you for sharing your experience!
Caramel_Apple said...
Feb. 18, 2010 at 6:39 pm
That was pretty freaky! I think you could've taken more time to write this, since you didn't spell out whole words, you didn't punctuate, and you ran words together. However, it was a very moving piece.
tily345 replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 3:30 pm
it wasnt supposed too an it doesnt matter
Caramel_Apple replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 5:53 pm
Uh, yes it does! If you wear sweats to someplace, a general assumption is that you are sloppy. So if you don't take the time to punctuate or spell correctly, well you are giving off the idea that you don't care about your work. So therefore, it DOES matter.
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