Another Night

July 25, 2009
By Anonymous

My eyes sting with unshed tears, everyday wearing a mask looking; strong and happy but in reality, I'm wasting away , broken and hurt wondering if God there. if he even cares His childs suffering.I wonder if people knew the truth...if they saw the scars, would they help me or run away never to look back. then suddenly your arms are around me and i know I'll make it through another night.


The author's comments:
i hope this article reminds you there is always hope...

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on Dec. 1 2009 at 8:14 am
zoeylife BRONZE, Mountain City, Tennessee
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i love ur paragragh! :) and it'll be rele hard to get through, but when its finally beat, you feel so much better, like no more hiding. and stuff like that. it was rele scary with ppl and not knowing if they would shun me... but i found out that ppl rele do care. just have to find the right ones... :)

kaylah said...
on Oct. 8 2009 at 1:44 pm
I like this story, it has alot of descriptive words, but a few grammer errors. Such as, were you say broken and hurt wondering if god there. You should say broken and hurt wondering if God is there. Also, many of your sentences aren't capitalized like if and then. I love how you wonder about god and if he is there but in my opinion I think he is. God is looking over you no matter what. Your paragraph is short, but it tells alot from what you are talking about. Great Job!!!!!!

Hockey Rox said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 3:11 pm
this is a very discriptive paragraph i like it alot

on Sep. 14 2009 at 8:22 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
37 articles 2 photos 255 comments

Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore


See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

i mean alot.

on Sep. 14 2009 at 8:21 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
37 articles 2 photos 255 comments

Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore


See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

i like most of this aloy, even though i personally believe God is always there. he cares, he just can't live your life for you.

on Sep. 12 2009 at 7:21 am
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

Very sad! It's a short, simple story, but it tells all it needs to tell. Great job!

thea22 GOLD said...
on Sep. 10 2009 at 2:57 pm
thea22 GOLD, Queens, New York
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im kinda confused




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