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Release Me This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

Crash into me
make me fall apart
steal my identity
cut out my heart
Rip me to shreds
pulling me down
look into my head
throw me around
Follow me here
as I bleed and I break
listen to my tears
and the sorrow they make
They fall to the ground
and echo through walls
way beyond down
where nobody falls
Come into this place
release my soul
look into my face
and make it go
Follow me, help me
find me inside
help me to be
what I cannot find
Surrounded and seized
broken by fear
drowned and betrayed … please
just release me … from here

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.





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_Snow_ said...
Dec. 2, 2010 at 8:09 pm:
Amazing! :)
 
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~MidnightAngel~ said...
Feb. 12, 2010 at 2:30 am:
COOL!!!!!!!!!!!! That's exactlly how I feel;-}
 
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rare9v said...
Jan. 18, 2010 at 10:23 pm:
he freaking does not have to release you!!!!!!!! you NEED to release from HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! haha that's why u need to hang out with me during lunch bleh ;P
 
kapella This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 5:18 pm :
omg!!!!!!!!!!! is this who i think it is???????????????? lol tell me who you are!!!!!!!!!!!11
 
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sarahmarie said...
Dec. 10, 2009 at 9:39 pm:
This is incredible.!
 
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Jesus_Freak_And_Proud_Of_It said...
Jun. 30, 2009 at 11:56 pm:
WOW. That was amazing...that's all I have to say.
 
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