The Knife

March 28, 2009
By Escaped GOLD, Litchfield, Illinois
Escaped GOLD, Litchfield, Illinois
19 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Lets go make daisy chains in the grass, but only if its 74 degrees or above. I would like to fall in love with you." (:


There are so many things she could have accomplished with that knife.
She could have pierced her wrist for the first time; imagined the blood was flowing from someone else. She could have killed her brother, but that would be unfair... Honestly was it his fault his screams of agony made her sanity dissapear? No, it was n't. Though..with that knife she could have taken her own life. That was fair, right? She nodded to herself, her breathing pattern skipped every half of a second. As she raised the gleaming blade above her neck Sagar's-her love- smile had came to mind and she shattered into tears, broke weak in her knees. With that knife she could have lost the very reason she lived. Instead, she sharpened a pencil, bleed her heart on the page, and slid the knife back into the drawer...


The author's comments:
I wrote this one night when I was insanely close to sucide. And then, of course, thought of the man I loved. You see, wriing has its own way of healing. Venting they call it but I see it as an unknown medication to the soul. It saved my life, never forget that it can save yours, too. When you have a difficult situation, I hope you chose the pencil-instead of the sword. Or knife in this situation lol.

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Sarbear GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2010 at 12:09 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

this is really great, even though ive never gone through this, i feel like i lived it. great job! check out some of my poems too:-)

on Mar. 15 2010 at 8:26 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
12 articles 0 photos 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff

been therre wrote the words too, now focus on noot being there again

appaloosa said...
on Oct. 6 2009 at 6:05 pm
i know how you feel.i have been that close before to.you'r a great writer, keep writing:)


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