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As The Flower Looks Toward The Sun

August 17, 2009
By Breluvsu GOLD, LaFayette, Alabama
Breluvsu GOLD, LaFayette, Alabama
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Live, Love, Laugh.


The sun shines bright"I sould say. Everything looks its way.The bees stop buzzing and then the flower sees ,what a beautiful life this can surley be:)

The author's comments:
This piece is about if something is in the way keep looking toward the good and someday you will see this is a beautiful life. You make it what you want it to bee.Personaly I would like to be the flower "patient." This is a beautiful life if you want it to be.

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kayla14 said...
on Oct. 16 2009 at 7:00 am
I like this story, you have a spelling mistake which is in the beginning sentence The sunshines" I sould say. But in that sentence sould is suppost to be spelled should.I like how you talk about comparing the sun and the bees stop to look at the sun and no that it will have a good day. Add more to your writing and I think it will be great! Keep writing!

gomez!!(: said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 1:20 pm
u had a greatly horible ishly piece(:

JOBIN!!:) said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 1:20 pm
just thought i would let you know that you have a great view on the enviorment


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