Hannah Smith I love your story it is a great fiction story.
When I read this I feel like I’m right in the story. I also like how you tell about him and what he does, and I like how u put your self In the story as here brother and as the narrator. But for me in the end of the story it was confusing but it was good once I understood. I agree with what you said “two seconds is all it takes for a car to drift into oncoming traffic.” I have experience with that .this story can teach you a lesson about not to drink and drive. Like I said before it is great I would like to see more like it