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I know I am doomed
As the knife pierces my skin
Blood drips from the wound
As I dig deeper
I can feel them stair
At the scars on my arms
I don’t think it’s fair
They think they are better than me
I know we all have flaws
Mine are just easier to see



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Kat_PoetryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
yesterday at 7:19 pm:
This is really good. Its short, and to the point. It desccribed how other people react to the scars that they see, also, which i think is cool. Self harm is absolutly a horribal thing to get into, and something I personally battle everyday. I like this poem alot though. good work!
 
Ravenna replied...
today at 7:56 pm :
Thanks, Its always nice to have feedback from fellow writers. I'm glad to also hear feedback from somebody who goes through what I go through every day. My heart goes out to you and know that you are not alone in this.
 
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