In “Sports” by Michelle Y. I really felt the sincerity in her words when she described how much sport meant to her and how they helped her. When she talked about soccer’s main lesson about working harder to get better I can really connect with that because during Summer I worked and worked at my soccer skills to be ready for this year’s soccer season. Without learning that lesson I’m sure I wouldn’t be where I am right now. I also liked that you know that in order to stay fit and healthy you have to take part in some exercise whether its through sports or working out. Plus you also mentioned that sports are a good way to release stress from either social problems or just an overload of school work. Overall this was a great written college essay that explains the importance of sports in our lifes