The unknown

October 10, 2017
By Tabreia BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
Tabreia BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
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Like every other night my father would kiss my forehead and say
goodnight. Tonight was different. He didn't speak to me at all , instead when I said goodnight he stayed silent and walked out the door with an emotionless face. Something didn't feel right to me. I  thought I was over thinking it and he was just tired from work , so I fell asleep.
I woke up and looked at my clock it was 12:07 Am. I looked over at
my closet that was at the foot of my bed and saw the unbelievable. There was glowing eyes staring at me with a devilish grin I could only see it’s teeth. My heart was pumping so fast that I could feel it bout to burst out chest. So I hid my head under the sheets for a few moments.
After I could feel someone’s hot breath on my neck so I took the sheets of my head , there was an unknown figure standing there. It told me to wake up. After that all I could remember was waking up and checking my clock it said 12:06. Then I heard a creak coming from my closet the  unknown presence was standing there. To be continued

The author's comments:

This was an assignment in my english class

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