A Dream

October 30, 2016
By AlexKShorts PLATINUM, Vienna, Virginia
AlexKShorts PLATINUM, Vienna, Virginia
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It’s dark.

The moon is bright.

There’s a highway and a forest.

The trees are wet.


He pulls over.

A cop raps on his window.

“What’re you doing out so late?”

He’s driving back from a party.

“Have you been drinking tonight sir?”

He hasn’t.

He looks sober enough.

“Alright, drive safe, then.”

He nods.

“And you’ll want to keep your lights on around here.”

He drives off.

Twenty minutes pass.

The music is soft.

He turns into the woods.

A dirt road.

Ten minutes.

A gate.

He steps out.

He walks around and continues on foot.

Leaves ruffle between his steps.

A sound.

Light at first but getting louder.


And some panting.

Still a hundred yards off.

The crickets are silent on this night.

Over the ridge.

A flashlight.

It shimmers back and forth as the person holding it works.

He is seen watching.

The light bounces wildly as it runs toward him.

He freezes in his place.

Black teeth.  Yellow eyes.

Hardly ten feet away.

Those horrible yellow eyes…

They’ll be there forever.

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This article has 2 comments.

on Nov. 21 2016 at 9:17 pm
AlexKShorts PLATINUM, Vienna, Virginia
20 articles 0 photos 2 comments
thanks a bunch that really means alot. I tried to check out some of your stuff but i noticed you didn't post anything :P you should write more!

SantaClaus said...
on Nov. 21 2016 at 10:57 am
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I really liked this. The spacing in between each line encouraged me to read down slowly, and I could really take in every line. It kind of reminded me of that thing Edger Allen Poe does where he strongly implies something’s happening, but makes it vague enough so that the reader needs to fill in the blanks and make assumptions on there own. Nice creepy read.


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