Shattered Peace

February 19, 2013
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Chapter 1

Ba boom.
Ba boom.
Ba Bo-- ...
White light.
White space.
Gentle figures in distance. Faces appear.
Peace. Serenity.
I stand upright without flexing a muscle. Ultimate peace.

"Follow us."

I follow the innocent- looking figures.
Time feels slow. Time is gracious.
Gentle lights appear in the distance. So far in the distance.
I glance at my feet.
They are still yet I am moving.
A white flowing dress tumbles from my shoulders to my toes.
Still moving, pure- white angel eagle wings gracefully keep me afloat the ground.
Amazing peace.
I shall never leave this peace.

Dark figure.
Peace begins to shatter, and stop altogether.
The dark figure stands out upon this painting of purity and peace and staggers towards me.
I begin to run. I need the sentimental peace back, I need it.
My mind dazed, I move no faster than I have been previously.
Flick my head around,
flash of a black face and fiery eyes that almost pierce mine, close eyes.
In the same moment, I gasp fiercely and shoot my eyes open to the inside of a hospital room.

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I8Grass This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 4, 2013 at 3:04 am
I dig how you started this. I also like the topic. Exploration into the dead.
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I8Grass This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 5, 2013 at 12:01 am
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