Fear Chapter 1 The Darkness vs The Mind

November 1, 2012
By , Edenton, NC
I awake in a cell chained up with cuffs i dont feel or see anything but darkness and dust. I try to get up but i start to feel numb,then i fall back on my bum. I start thing do i realy deserve this WHAT HAVE I DONE? I hear voices in the dark i think im going CRAZY! I get up again with better luck. my stoumich and me start feelen like sick disgusting muck. i keep movin looking for a wall until i suddenly trip OH NO NO AHHH I FALL! i get up looking around with my ajusted eyes i start seeing a trip wire reaching across left to right! so i follewed the wire it led to a gun of some sort but in the dark couldet tell but all i know i was supposed to DIE! i kept walking until i almost trip on a crate. i look inside and find a loaf of bread and a pitcher of water this leaves me in terrible dismay. thoughts come to me horrible thoughts i start to think is THIS MY LAST SUPPER ALIVE! IS THIS WHERE I AM TO MEET THE USHER OF MY DEMISE! NO THIS IS TRECECHERY THIS IS A LIE! THIS I WILL NOT BE COMPRIMISED! i hear the voices again. they tell me what i dont want said they tell me MY FATE IS SET!!! i finnish eating i feel sick. my sight becomes blury it becomes a dark mist. i fall and just lye there thinking the goal of survival is just to far. just to hard. im going to DIE IN THIS UNRELENTING WRETCHED DARK!!!

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MoonChild97 said...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 1:23 pm
im just kidding its really good
MoonChild97 said...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 1:20 pm
god ur so annoying  its good     
HellBaby said...
Nov. 14, 2012 at 12:56 pm
Luv it :) yaa wanted whoo who
HellBaby said...
Nov. 14, 2012 at 12:56 pm
omg I love its deep and tretuorous
YOLOBH This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 8, 2012 at 1:30 pm
I really like it. Its a fun read and definitely gets your audience thinking. However, I feel like the spelling mistakes (if intentional) don't add to the content of your work. If unintentional, then just give your work a bit more revision. Other than that its awesome. Keep writing.
Timpster said...
Nov. 6, 2012 at 9:49 am
I few spelling mistakes, but overall magnificent :)
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