Fear Chapter 1 The Darkness vs The Mind

November 1, 2012
By Anonymous

I awake in a cell chained up with cuffs i dont feel or see anything but darkness and dust. I try to get up but i start to feel numb,then i fall back on my bum. I start thing do i realy deserve this WHAT HAVE I DONE? I hear voices in the dark i think im going CRAZY! I get up again with better luck. my stoumich and me start feelen like sick disgusting muck. i keep movin looking for a wall until i suddenly trip OH NO NO AHHH I FALL! i get up looking around with my ajusted eyes i start seeing a trip wire reaching across left to right! so i follewed the wire it led to a gun of some sort but in the dark couldet tell but all i know i was supposed to DIE! i kept walking until i almost trip on a crate. i look inside and find a loaf of bread and a pitcher of water this leaves me in terrible dismay. thoughts come to me horrible thoughts i start to think is THIS MY LAST SUPPER ALIVE! IS THIS WHERE I AM TO MEET THE USHER OF MY DEMISE! NO THIS IS TRECECHERY THIS IS A LIE! THIS I WILL NOT BE COMPRIMISED! i hear the voices again. they tell me what i dont want said they tell me MY FATE IS SET!!! i finnish eating i feel sick. my sight becomes blury it becomes a dark mist. i fall and just lye there thinking the goal of survival is just to far. just to hard. im going to DIE IN THIS UNRELENTING WRETCHED DARK!!!


The author's comments:
this article is all about how darkness affects our minds and how we can make up thing that arnt rlly there. enjoy and plz comment.

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on Nov. 28 2012 at 1:23 pm
ChildOfTheArrow BRONZE, San Pedro, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Scars remind us where we've been. They don't have to dictate where we're going" David Rossi (criminal minds)

im just kidding its really good

on Nov. 28 2012 at 1:20 pm
ChildOfTheArrow BRONZE, San Pedro, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Scars remind us where we've been. They don't have to dictate where we're going" David Rossi (criminal minds)

god ur so annoying  its good     

HellBaby said...
on Nov. 14 2012 at 12:56 pm
Luv it :) yaa wanted whoo who

HellBaby said...
on Nov. 14 2012 at 12:56 pm
omg I love its deep and tretuorous

HannaBella said...
on Nov. 8 2012 at 1:30 pm
HannaBella, Beverly Hills, California
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I really like it. Its a fun read and definitely gets your audience thinking. However, I feel like the spelling mistakes (if intentional) don't add to the content of your work. If unintentional, then just give your work a bit more revision. Other than that its awesome. Keep writing.

on Nov. 6 2012 at 9:49 am
TimmyTiger GOLD, Somewhere, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"It's time to nut up, or shut up." - Woodey Harrelson "Zombieland"

I few spelling mistakes, but overall magnificent :)




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