Journal response

June 8, 2012
By , New Brunswick, NJ
“ Kyle don’t kill me leave me alone !” said Cassie. “ No you killed my brother.” said kyle. We were at the trail, just days before i was kidnapped by kyle, davis older brother. He was seeking revenge and he got it. He made me suffer for four days till office Ben found, he saved my life because i would have gone completely mad from being alone in the dark and dehydrated . I slowly came back to reality when the judge screamed “ Quiet Quiet in my courtroom.” He screamed, “ Officer Ben controlled that young woman or i will have her thrown into jail.” In my head i was cursing that judge out because he had no right to throw me into jail. kyle had to go to jail not me, he was the monster not me. He had me kidnapped and buried deep underground, he was crazy.

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Alyssa.N.S. said...
Jun. 13, 2012 at 8:59 pm
???? The characters, plot, and sentences were unclear.  Try working on shorter sentences, putting in paragraphs, and writing a story with a full plot.
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