April 5, 2012
By , fort morgan, CO
It is dark. Really, really dark. All I could see were these green eyes, these horrible green eyes.
“Am I hallucinating?” I ask.
I am not because they start to get closer to me.
“What are you or who are you? I ask as I try to follow its eyes.
I try to get up but I can’t. I am tied up to something a chair, a stool, what?
“Don’t even try!” it says.
I keep trying. It comes up to me and grabs the sides. “I said don’t even try! I said.
Its face doesn’t look normal. It’s like a snakes, cow, horse. Uhh its uglllly! Oh my god.
“Are you a shape shifter?” I ask my voice sounding trembley.
“Don’t you talk either.” It says.
“I asked you a question!” I yell.
I feel something shot into my shoulder. I start to fade away.
I wake up hours later to the sound of gushing water. Now I am not in a secluded room.
“Nice of you to join us!” a voice says. The same voice.
“Where am I? What did you do to me?” I ask.
“Where am I? What did you do to me?” It mimics.
“You wouldn’t shut up. So now you are in a pool, filled with water. If you look to your right and left you will see a door. You must choose wisely or else. And as a hint one of them contains something that can or will hurt you till death.” He says and begins to leave.
“Woow! Wait if you think I am going to die at least you should tell me who you are and what you want of me?” I question.
“You really don’t remember? 10 years ago you were the cause of this” he points to his face,
” happening to me. I want the same thing to happen to you. Now If I may…..” he says and signals with his hand.
“Dad, my father did that to you. Not me, I was only 5. Still a kid how is that possible?” I say as I swim over to the side.
“Yes, now you are remembering.” He was now fumbling around with his fingers. “You were five but you were there.” He points at me. “You laughed at me. I still remember that face of yours. You were laughing. Thinking it was funny. I was being used as an experiment. You were there, you were there! You remember that because now you are going to die!” he yells.
“You won’t. Because of this!” I grab onto the edge of the pool and I kick him. Punch him and throw him in the pool. I run out the door only to find another guy.
“What do you want with me?” the guy was holding a gun at me.
“You can’t give me nothing nothing nothing!”
I see a figure twist the man’s neck! Now it’s headed towards me.
“Thank you so much.” I mumble as I am now on my knees.
He shoves me to the ground, and picks up the gun.
“Wait what I thought you were helping me.” It drags me by the arm back inside.
“NOOOOOOOOOOO NOT AGAIN! The door is slammed shut, with no more yells to be heard.

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AndriaStar said...
May 2, 2012 at 8:32 am
The beginning was good, but the ending wasn't I didn't understand what happened. You need to describe it more. Really describe what happend, before the story started and after.
mariashot10432 replied...
May 3, 2012 at 11:29 am
Thanks the beggining i did like too. The ending is supposed to be a cliff hanger. it starts all back over again but with more and different events happening.
AndriaStar replied...
May 3, 2012 at 2:26 pm
Ohhhh. Ok.
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