Poisoned Arrows

April 18, 2012
By novemberswirl BRONZE, Scotland, Other
novemberswirl BRONZE, Scotland, Other
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I stand alone in the field of unknown and unforgotten. Nobody can hear my tortured wails. Nobody is around, watching me struggle...
The monster coiled in my mind awoke, his masked eyes terrorizing my every thought.
High pitched, poisonous shrieks slithered out of it, drumming through me, knees buckled over as I landed into the deceased grass warped around my bare feet. Not one bone in my body was strong enough to pull my ‘corpse’ back up; the lonely soul amongst disparate depths of poisoned tales...

The author's comments:
hope you like it and want to read more! so far have only done a few paras in this story so far butwas hoping to see how it is...

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on May. 6 2012 at 2:43 pm
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
-There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (Shakespeare, Hamlet)

Beautfully described; great imagery. :-)

on May. 5 2012 at 12:53 pm
CoffeeChickx3, Unknown, Other
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OMG! Lovin' it...  you don't know who i am but you'll find out!!<3 keep writing! probably see ya Monday! <3<3

on Apr. 24 2012 at 2:06 pm
JustPaperAndPencil BRONZE, Milford, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
The saddest thing in the world, is loving someone who used to love you.

This is good! Continue writing !

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