Cinderella was right

March 7, 2011
By Niya_Smilees GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
Niya_Smilees GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
13 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live in the moment because reality hurts."


Her hollow words sang a deadly song as she spoke of Jenna's death. Frown painted on her face as if she really cared how she died or lived her life. Was I the only one who noticed? He eyes seamed to shift ever so slightly in my direction when she mouthed death, as if I where next. Now i wouldn't say she was a killer, I didn't know anything really about her. What I could say was something was wrong here. Was I the only one who felt the cold air swirl when Jenna and death? Was I the only one who noticed those cold vine green eyes? Was i the only one who had a bad feeling about Jenna's stepmother? I shut my eyes tight, Wanting to block out everything she said and everything I felt when she said it. I wanted this to be normal. Why could nothing ever be normal? When my eyes reopened my breath quickened. I looked around, no eyes where turned on me. Was I loud or was I crazy? I needed to leave as fast as I could but my legs betrayed me and where glued to the cool green grass. Her eyes rested on mine, painted frown slightly turning up. Was this how Jenna was punished? By the spell of her stepmothers wicked ways? My body fell through a faze. Shaking, burning. It felt as if white hot flames sliced my insides. No eyes turned to me. I can to realize my body had not moved. It was like my body frame was frozen but my insides suffered a painful death. I felt my heart exploding inside me and Jenna's words came to my head, the day before her death she had told me, Cinderella was right.



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on May. 7 2011 at 4:41 pm
FishboytheWriter PLATINUM, Nogales, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Chaos, disaster, and disorder-My work here is done." --Mr. Fontes

very cool. sespence acheived.

 


on Apr. 11 2011 at 8:09 am
MissAwefull SILVER, Amesbury, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"You find him, you kill him. You cut his head off. Any one want a cookie?"

The last sentence made me jump, coolio.

on Mar. 11 2011 at 9:12 am
Niya_Smilees GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
13 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live in the moment because reality hurts."

Thanks so much , glad you liked it :)

on Mar. 10 2011 at 7:06 pm
JenelleW BRONZE, Camarillo, California
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Favorite Quote:
"You are born with only half a heart. You have to find the other half on your own"-Unknown

Wow. I really liked this piece. It would be great for you to add onto it. I wanna hear more(: Great job


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