Excerpts from a Chat Room

January 30, 2011
By Davidson SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
Davidson SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
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(note: for preservation of evidence, all spelling and grammar mistakes have been left unchanged)
Taken from Floweryfun.com chat at 16:42 on 11/12/2004
Classified: Under Inspection. Considered Dangerous.

BingBongBros: I shook a man’s hand on the bus today. He’ll never see his family again.
BingBongBros has logged out
User: Sunflower241: Hey guys! Check out this picture of these marigolds I grew! (Note: picture unavailable. Linked to website “Picturebucket.net; now defunct)
New user logged on: Zutara4eva: OMG! These are amazing! And its got OVER 9000 views already! Lol
New user logged on: Ares-the-betta: Pretty good! I like the colors, how’d you get them to grow like that? (p.s. who’s that guy in the background?)
Sunflower241: What are you talking about?
Zutara4eva: No, I see it. He’s behind the flower bucket, see? He’s wearing suit, can’t you see him?
New user logged on: Lanipator: I see him too, he kinda looks like my neighbor.
Sunflower241: I don’t see it. Maybe it’s a glitch in the internet?
Ares-the-betta:… you fail internet forever.
Lanipator: seriously, im looking at a picture, they look exactly the same.
Zutara4eva: he kinda looks like my neighbor too,
Sunflower241:fanhvuteraelougp
Ares-the-bettaL lol wut?
LAnipator: Ah well, I gtg guys, dentist appointment.
Ares-the-betta: bye!
Zutara4eva: c ya!
(Note: At this point there is a five minute period of inactivity on the site)
Ares-thebetta: Aren’t you going? It says ur still logged on
Lanipator: It’s not letting me, its weird
Zutara4eva: that’s weird, hey, sunflower, ur good with computers, whats going on?
(note: another rest, 3 minutes this time)
Ares-the-betta: Sunflower?
Zutara4eva: she’s prob in the bathroom
Lanipator: My neighbors creeping me out, he’s looking at me through the window
Ares-the-betta: creepy.
Sunflower241: New pic uploaded from picturebucket.net (note: Picture is of a wall spattered with red matter, next to the limp body of a teenage girl, presumed to be Sunflower241. Slightly off to the side is a tall man in a suit, obscured by the camera cutoff)
Zutara4eva: HOLY CRAP!
Ares-the-betta: Sunflower, what the crap? Do you wan’t to get banned?
Sunflower241 has disconnected
Zutara4eva: What was that about?
Ares-the-betta: idunno, Sunflowers a weird chick.
Lanipator: new pic uploaded from picturebucket.net (note, same as above, however instead of a teenage girl, it appears to be a middle aged man)
Lanipator has disconnected.
Zutara4eva: WHAT IS WRONG TODAY! Im out.
Zutara4eva:Whjat? I can’t log off? Hold on, can I turn off the power?
Zutara4eva::WHAT THE CRAP?
Ares-the-betta: Hey, I’ll brb, my neighbors at the door.
Zutara4eva:kk
(note: another break)
Zutara4eva:Ares?
Ares-the-betta: New pic uploaded for picturebucket.net (same, but with a young boy)
Zutara4eva: oh god. Guys if this is a prank it isn’t funny!
Zutara4eva:guys?
Zutara4eva has been disconnected
(Note: Shortly after this was dated a sting of murders occurred on a number of the other frequenters of this channel. Further investigation found the presence of a “Neighborly man” always wearing a business suit near the crimes. Comparing the photos it is clear that these are not the same men, as each has a radically different face.)


The author's comments:
This is just a little Horror Story I wrote, nothing really. You kinda have to read it twice to get the effect

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on Oct. 7 2011 at 11:02 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~
~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~
~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than
a distant memory.~

Awesome. I love a good horror story and this was tres good!

5/5


Steph0804 GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2011 at 12:52 am
Steph0804 GOLD, Seoul, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Explaining a joke is like dissecting a frog: you understand it better, but the frog dies in the process." -E.B. White

I was so creeped out! Love it! So suspenseful!

on Oct. 1 2011 at 11:37 pm
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
20 articles 1 photo 375 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

Holy chiz. This is freaky and incredibly creepy! I can feel chills going up my spine. That was amazing. The idea was fantastic!

LaceeJade GOLD said...
on Oct. 1 2011 at 11:23 pm
LaceeJade GOLD, Bucyrus, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
♥ I've made mistakes in my life. i've let people take advantage of me, and i accepted way less than i deserve. But, i've learned from my bad choices, and even though there are some things i can never get back and people who will never be sorry. i'll know better next time and i wont settle for anything less than i deserve. ♥

This has creeped me out lol. I have a very creepy neighbore. Ahh.. but other than that this would be a good movie script.

on Sep. 25 2011 at 6:19 am
ox.Alia.xo BRONZE, Lanoka Harbor, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"100 men can keep a secret, If 99 are dead"
-Ben Franklin

❝"Imperfection is beauty, madness is genius and it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring."
-Marilyn Monroe

I actually really love this. Great idea :]

on Feb. 5 2011 at 11:03 pm
LovelyMiss GOLD, Floresville, Texas
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That was really good




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