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Taken from Floweryfun.com chat at 16:42 on 11/12/2004
Classified: Under Inspection. Considered Dangerous.

BingBongBros: I shook a man’s hand on the bus today. He’ll never see his family again.
BingBongBros has logged out
User: Sunflower241: Hey guys! Check out this picture of these marigolds I grew! (Note: picture unavailable. Linked to website “Picturebucket.net; now defunct)
New user logged on: Zutara4eva: OMG! These are amazing! And its got OVER 9000 views already! Lol
New user logged on: Ares-the-betta: Pretty good! I like the colors, how’d you get them to grow like that? (p.s. who’s that guy in the background?)
Sunflower241: What are you talking about?
Zutara4eva: No, I see it. He’s behind the flower bucket, see? He’s wearing suit, can’t you see him?
New user logged on: Lanipator: I see him too, he kinda looks like my neighbor.
Sunflower241: I don’t see it. Maybe it’s a glitch in the internet?
Ares-the-betta:… you fail internet forever.
Lanipator: seriously, im looking at a picture, they look exactly the same.
Zutara4eva: he kinda looks like my neighbor too,
Sunflower241:fanhvuteraelougp
Ares-the-bettaL lol wut?
LAnipator: Ah well, I gtg guys, dentist appointment.
Ares-the-betta: bye!
Zutara4eva: c ya!
(Note: At this point there is a five minute period of inactivity on the site)
Ares-thebetta: Aren’t you going? It says ur still logged on
Lanipator: It’s not letting me, its weird
Zutara4eva: that’s weird, hey, sunflower, ur good with computers, whats going on?
(note: another rest, 3 minutes this time)
Ares-the-betta: Sunflower?
Zutara4eva: she’s prob in the bathroom
Lanipator: My neighbors creeping me out, he’s looking at me through the window
Ares-the-betta: creepy.
Sunflower241: New pic uploaded from picturebucket.net (note: Picture is of a wall spattered with red matter, next to the limp body of a teenage girl, presumed to be Sunflower241. Slightly off to the side is a tall man in a suit, obscured by the camera cutoff)
Zutara4eva: HOLY CRAP!
Ares-the-betta: Sunflower, what the crap? Do you wan’t to get banned?
Sunflower241 has disconnected
Zutara4eva: What was that about?
Ares-the-betta: idunno, Sunflowers a weird chick.
Lanipator: new pic uploaded from picturebucket.net (note, same as above, however instead of a teenage girl, it appears to be a middle aged man)
Lanipator has disconnected.
Zutara4eva: WHAT IS WRONG TODAY! Im out.
Zutara4eva:Whjat? I can’t log off? Hold on, can I turn off the power?
Zutara4eva::WHAT THE CRAP?
Ares-the-betta: Hey, I’ll brb, my neighbors at the door.
Zutara4eva:kk
(note: another break)
Zutara4eva:Ares?
Ares-the-betta: New pic uploaded for picturebucket.net (same, but with a young boy)
Zutara4eva: oh god. Guys if this is a prank it isn’t funny!
Zutara4eva:guys?
Zutara4eva has been disconnected
(Note: Shortly after this was dated a sting of murders occurred on a number of the other frequenters of this channel. Further investigation found the presence of a “Neighborly man” always wearing a business suit near the crimes. Comparing the photos it is clear that these are not the same men, as each has a radically different face.)



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Love.Hate.Passion. said...
Oct. 7, 2011 at 11:02 pm

Awesome. I love a good horror story and this was tres good!

5/5

 
Steph0804 said...
Oct. 2, 2011 at 12:52 am
I was so creeped out! Love it! So suspenseful!
 
SecretFlame said...
Oct. 1, 2011 at 11:37 pm
Holy chiz. This is freaky and incredibly creepy! I can feel chills going up my spine. That was amazing. The idea was fantastic!
 
LaceeJade This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 1, 2011 at 11:23 pm
This has creeped me out lol. I have a very creepy neighbore. Ahh.. but other than that this would be a good movie script.
 
Alia_xo said...
Sept. 25, 2011 at 6:19 am
I actually really love this. Great idea :]
 
LovelyMiss This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 5, 2011 at 11:03 pm
That was really good
 
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