This place

December 1, 2010
By tylerz GOLD, Cheyenne Wells, Colorado
tylerz GOLD, Cheyenne Wells, Colorado
19 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is to short to not share it with another person.


The place was huge, bigger than anyone could imagine. The ceiling had to be at least eight hundred yards up. There we four drop offs on each side of this underground system. Each of them looked like tunnels, tunnels that led somewhere else. Water was running toward them. Like if they just dropped off. Like a waterfall that had no ending. There was so much water. I could imagine a little child asking her mommy where the water comes from in the sink, and her saying, "The big place were Tyler's at." I looked around. There was nothing to grab onto. No platforms that you could crawl up on. My brother was definitely not here. I had to choose one of the tunnels. He could have gone into either one. I treaded the water a little longer, deciding which one I should choose. I finally made my choice and started heading that way. The water had torn away at the concrete. It was almost unstable. I could see the foundation of this place. Who could make such a place? Why would they? I shouted as loud as I could, "WYATT!" "ARE YOU THERE?" I listened. Surprisingly over all the rushing water, I could hear a faint noise. Something, calling my name, I listened harder, trying to focus on it. The noise kept calling me. The more I tried to listen the more I could hear what it said. I could only make out the first few words. "Tyler......danger..........now.........HELP!!! I couldn’t tell where it was coming from. I just listened. "Tyler.......danger.........go......now.....please........me. I don't know why that word danger kept sticking to me. Every time this voice said it, it was like the word was slapping me in the face. Tyler you’re in........Go back now......please don't........ ..



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on Dec. 5 2010 at 7:05 pm
vampiresrock GOLD, Cornish, New Hampshire
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When life gives you oranges, make grape juice and sit back and let the world wounder how the hell you just did that.

ooookay....it's all opinions...that's yours and i have mine...sooooo...kay?

reyannjoiner said...
on Dec. 4 2010 at 9:11 pm
No, vampires suck

tylerz GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2010 at 6:27 pm
tylerz GOLD, Cheyenne Wells, Colorado
19 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is to short to not share it with another person.

ya thats what i was getting at thanks!!

jake2011 said...
on Dec. 3 2010 at 12:57 pm
It was good.  I really liked it.  Good job.  Keep it up.

on Dec. 3 2010 at 10:42 am
vampiresrock GOLD, Cornish, New Hampshire
12 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you oranges, make grape juice and sit back and let the world wounder how the hell you just did that.

it was good

madm0e BRONZE said...
on Dec. 3 2010 at 9:42 am
madm0e BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
4 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
People say I have no heart, that is not true, I have the heart of a small child. It's in a jar on my desk. -Stephen King

I liked it.

Great choice in picture, it made the story interesting. I truly got a sense of paranoia, if that's what you were trying to get at.



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