The Vampire

April 1, 2010
By Lexi-pex GOLD, Billingham, Other
Lexi-pex GOLD, Billingham, Other
13 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams."
- Eleanor Roosevelt


I lean over to rest my elbows on the window sill and avert my troubled gaze over to the long stretch of hills obstructing the late evening sunset on the horizon.
I sigh loudly, fogging up the cool glass I rest my forehead on. My vision is impared, so turn I the latch and let the cool evening breeze softly whip at my cheeks and play with my wavy hair. I feel goosebumps appear on my arms and neck; but i know that it isn’t from the cold. I feel as if I am being watched. I ignore the feeling; I have bigger things to worry about.
I hear the soft brush my door makes when it is being opened. My entire body freezes. A calm, deep voice tells me I musn’t scream. I obey. I carefully turn my head. There, in the doorway to my room, stands a dark, cloaked figure. Underneath the thick cover of the cloak, I see that the person is wearing average clothes. I think it is one of my brothers friends pulling a prank on me.
Suddenly, my head feels unnaturally heavy and my eyelids slam shut as i hit my bedroom floor.
Cold, hard hands firmly grip my bare shoulders, bringing me out of my conciousness, and I feel two sharp-pointed needles carefully piercing the side of my neck. I gasp as the right side of my body explodes into spasms of firery pain, withering as the agony takes over my helpless body...


The author's comments:
what inspired me to write this was that i love books that connect with the reader, and that is what i tried to do.

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Lexi-pex GOLD said...
on Mar. 12 2011 at 4:06 pm
Lexi-pex GOLD, Billingham, Other
13 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams."
- Eleanor Roosevelt

i have written some other stuff for teen ink, and i was looking for some of your work to read, but i couldn't find any... : )

Lexi-pex GOLD said...
on Mar. 12 2011 at 1:16 pm
Lexi-pex GOLD, Billingham, Other
13 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams."
- Eleanor Roosevelt

thank you so much!! : )

on Feb. 18 2011 at 7:44 pm
DeeBear1982 BRONZE, Houston, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's the Joshua tree's struggle that makes it beautiful" -The glass castle

You are so gracious while everyone is asking you to look at their work, i guess i understand why they do it...

anyway, i love yours it says so little but still so much, i do however wish there was more, im sucker for a good vampire story and it only helped because your detail was amazing. have you written anything else? i would love to read it!


Lexi-pex GOLD said...
on Jan. 5 2011 at 3:03 pm
Lexi-pex GOLD, Billingham, Other
13 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams."
- Eleanor Roosevelt

thank you, and I'll definitely check your out! : )

Lexi-pex GOLD said...
on Jan. 5 2011 at 3:03 pm
Lexi-pex GOLD, Billingham, Other
13 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams."
- Eleanor Roosevelt

thank you! : )

on Jan. 5 2011 at 10:32 am
vampiresrock GOLD, Cornish, New Hampshire
12 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
When life gives you oranges, make grape juice and sit back and let the world wounder how the hell you just did that.

nice! i loved it! very, very good! Kudos!

on Jan. 5 2011 at 4:35 am
Writomania PLATINUM, New Delhi, Other
22 articles 0 photos 119 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What really does not kill you, will only make you stronger"- Kanye West
"If there was no electricity, we would've had to watch the television by candle light"- Joe Jonas
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

wow thats a good article! its simply written and thats the beauty of it!

 

ps check out my article "hysteria"..


Lexi-pex GOLD said...
on Aug. 28 2010 at 3:22 am
Lexi-pex GOLD, Billingham, Other
13 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams."
- Eleanor Roosevelt

thank you!" that sounds great! i'd love to check out your work : )

teen_queen said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 2:47 pm

A million times wow! I loved it! 

Hey, please check out my story, Love or Drama (It's called Love or Romance but its supposed to be called Love or Drama), also the chapter where Brittney arrives in seattle and meets nikki, matt and kim is chapter 2. The chapter where they all talk about stephanie is chapter 3. TeenInk.com/fiction/romance/article/228711/Love-or-Drama-Chapter-2/.


Lexi-pex GOLD said...
on Apr. 18 2010 at 2:44 am
Lexi-pex GOLD, Billingham, Other
13 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams."
- Eleanor Roosevelt

thank you! and yes, i'll look at your work  : )

on Apr. 17 2010 at 3:41 pm
elfiewrites BRONZE, Hillsdale, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The seat of knowledge is in the head, of wisdom, in the heart."~William Hazlitt
"Be yourself, everyone else is taken."

WOW! That is all I can find words to say. This is wayyyyyy better than the Twilight books. Please, if you get the chance, give me feedback on my work too. Much appreciated! Keep on writing!




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