Who is that...

April 3, 2010
By _NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)


I shook my head and cocked it to the side. I groaned and pulled the covers over my head, only to make me feel trapped and sweaty. It was too quiet...

I lifted up my head from over the covers, and I sighed when I stared across my empty bedroom. The walls seemed to be an eerie blue, and my gasps came out in a hushed echo. It was only 9:00 pm. My parents were usually awake watching T.V or just listening to the radio, but this night was different. I could not hear ANYTHING.

Suddenly, I heard a voice that I did not recognize. The door was an inch open, but it was suddenly pushed full open, revealing a long silhouette that creeped on the bedroom door. I gasped and slowly slipped under the covers, trying to be unnoticable. Then, the blurry image seemed to crawl toward me, and I could finally see who this person was.


The author's comments:
This is the intro to a story I am going to write. I just hope you guys like it! I need some comments and ratings please!

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_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 12:24 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Thanks for the try. Whenever I search for an article, I never find it, just unrelated articles. I don't know why.

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 12:23 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Thank you. I don't like this piece anymore, I see so much I could improve on. Thanks for an honest judgement.   ;)

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 12:22 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Thank you! I don't know. Perhaps the boogie man!   ;)

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 12:20 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Thanks Ellie! I'll try my best!   =)

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 12:20 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Thanks! I actually have no idea. Gosh...now that I'm reading it over, I see so much that I can improve on.

on Jul. 12 2010 at 9:13 pm
B.R.Nack SILVER, Grand Junction, Colorado
5 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
“...Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win.”
--Stephen King

I tried to look at yours but when I did a search nothing came up :(

on Jul. 12 2010 at 9:10 pm
B.R.Nack SILVER, Grand Junction, Colorado
5 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
“...Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win.”
--Stephen King

Awesome!! Tell me when the rest of the story is done!!! :)

You should read my story, it's called Tonight He Must Die :)


Diana101 GOLD said...
on Jul. 12 2010 at 12:49 pm
Diana101 GOLD, Grove City, Ohio
13 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"God's delays are not God's denials"

Amazing intro! Can't wait for the story! :)

Check out my story, it's called Murder of Guilt. :)


on Jun. 17 2010 at 7:49 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

Not the best, but an intersting idea. It definately has promise.

on Jun. 11 2010 at 4:00 pm
MusicIsLife013 SILVER, New York, New York
6 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Light, like the flutter of wings, feel your hollow voice rushing into me
As you're longing to sing" -AFI

"Here we go again, I kinda wanna be more than friends, so take it easy on me I'm afraid you're never satisfied." -Neon Trees

holey c*** who is it?? haha. This is a very good intro. If there was more, I'd read it :)

EllieK. BRONZE said...
on Jun. 6 2010 at 3:18 pm
EllieK. BRONZE, Wilmette, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Not all who wander are lost"
JRR Tolkien

"Sometimes life sucks, so suck it up"
-ME

""We succeeded in taking that picture (from deep space), and if you look a it, you see a dot. Thats here. That's home. Thats us. On it, everyone you ever heard of

It definitely grabs you in from the beggining. Job well done, I liked it.

Could you check any of my stuff out, Thanks Elliek


on May. 17 2010 at 4:43 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

OMG! WHO IS IT???? this is an awesome story!! it pulls u in

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on May. 11 2010 at 3:27 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

I'll try to get some time for your work. Thnx for the comment!   =)

on May. 11 2010 at 11:55 am
meganleigh122 GOLD, Greeneville, Tennessee
13 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass... It's about learning to dance in the rain."

this is really good!!! you gotta continue it!! can you check out some of my stuff?? :)

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on May. 5 2010 at 3:09 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Thanks! Um, I might not be publishing it. Sorry, but thanks for the comment!

on May. 5 2010 at 2:33 pm
sunnyhunny PLATINUM, Litchfield, New Hampshire
22 articles 3 photos 329 comments

Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind."
-Ghandi

Let me know when you publish this story!  It sounds really good.

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on May. 1 2010 at 1:03 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Thanks, that's really kind of you! I do hope that I get an idea, and I'm sure I will. You've encouraged me alot. Thx!

on May. 1 2010 at 11:26 am
Meavescrete SILVER, Potomac, Maryland
5 articles 1 photo 90 comments
It happens, but i'm sure it'll come to you. you did a really great job on this one, and u did all by urself, so yeah the next will come 2 u.

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 30 2010 at 3:55 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Thanks so much! Kind of you to say.  :)

You know, I'm stumped on what to write in my whole story, but I'm still thinking...


on Apr. 30 2010 at 6:56 am
Meavescrete SILVER, Potomac, Maryland
5 articles 1 photo 90 comments
I WANNA READ WHAT'S NEXT!!!!!! I LOOVEEE THIS!!! GREAT JOB!


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