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The Death of a Loved One Part 1

October 30, 2009
By iDaReToDrEaM13 SILVER, Sharon Springs, New York
iDaReToDrEaM13 SILVER, Sharon Springs, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"By three methods we may learn wisdom: First, by reflection, which is noblest; Second, by imitation, which is easiest; and third by experience, which is the bitterest."
Confucius


My eyes shot open, and I struggled for breath. As I gasped for air, blood pools formed at the corners of my mouth. I grabbed the side of the table and exerted all of my energy to get up... scared to death. Clutching my burning stomach, I felt a warm wetness. Staring at my hands all i saw was blood... I looked around... all i saw was blood. I turned around with such speed it scared me, to see my mother, father, sister, and brother all sprawled out on the ground staring blankly back at me, stab marks penetrating their skin. My head spun and I collapsed to the ground, no thoughts going through my brain.

To Be Continued...


The author's comments:
This is something i wanted to write... i small bits.

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on Dec. 1 2009 at 12:14 am
DarkWolf23 BRONZE, Winchester, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
"Light thinks it travels faster than anything but it is wrong. No matter how fast light travels, it finds the darkness has always got there first, and is waiting for it." Terry Pratchett
i have others to but theres not enought room to post them

WOW... you realy caught my attention with the title but the paragraph left me dumbfounded i cant wait till next one