Holly

October 16, 2009
By barbestbcb BRONZE, Brooklin, Other
barbestbcb BRONZE, Brooklin, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them" - Walt Disney


I walked in to the beautiful room, but the thing that made it beautiful was the teenage boy that was standing in the middle of it. He was fair haired and had golden eyes – the eyes of an angel – his angular cheekbones made his face look strong. He held out a hand to me as if he were waiting for me. The thought of me dancing with an angel was like a dream. As we twirled round and round the room I caught glimpses of where we were. The place itself was beautiful. It was gold and looked very old, but it was like a place taken from heaven and put onto the earth. As I took my eyes away from the building and looked at the boy I was dancing with everything changed. Suddenly his golden eyes had turned blood red, and he bit into the side of my neck. The pain that shot through me was unbearable, but I couldn’t make a sound come out of my mouth. As his eyes found mine I saw the sorrow in his eyes and the fangs in his bloodied mouth before he went back to my neck. The pain that had shot through me was now replaced by an odd sensation. It felt pleasant in an odd way. I could feel myself being drained of blood. The blackness was coming into the edges of my vision. “I love you, Holly.” He whispered. Then it all went black.

I woke up with a jerk. The sheets of my bed were clinging to my thighs from all the sweat. It was just a bad dream I keep telling myself over and over, but the memories keep coming back. I record the dream in my journal, knowing that this is the third night this week that I have had the dream. As always I can’t help but look in the mirror. Slowly, I pull back my long brown hair and look at my neck. The wound was opened, again.


The author's comments:
This is my first piece, and I hope you all love it!

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on Mar. 13 2010 at 7:02 am
barbestbcb BRONZE, Brooklin, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them" - Walt Disney

Hey there ~*)Wish(*~ I have written more to this story, I love the story line so much that I am hoping to maybe have this published one day. Maybe I will post the rest online but that is still undecided. Thanks for supresing such an interest in my article. Can't wait for you to read my next story called Fate

on Mar. 13 2010 at 6:59 am
barbestbcb BRONZE, Brooklin, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them" - Walt Disney

I will totally check it out, I love reading first pieces from new authors on teen ink. What was it called?

on Mar. 10 2010 at 4:19 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

EEEK!! you NEED to write more!!! NOOWWWWWW!! before i die of agony!!! O.O

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on Mar. 9 2010 at 7:54 pm
Carriemcdoog, Oshawa, Other
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I pitty the fool

Ohh... I just wrote my first piece tooooo!!! U should check it out!!!!!!

on Nov. 25 2009 at 7:46 pm
barbestbcb BRONZE, Brooklin, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them" - Walt Disney

does that mean you liked it?

on Nov. 25 2009 at 4:48 pm
omj this like so twilight-esc! crazy angel boy stop biting people.


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