The Vampire Chronicles: Part 1-Allison (10)

September 30, 2009
I wasn’t sure whether I was mad at him or relieved that he actually meant to tell me. But it was kind of lame for him to tell me in a note. Why couldn’t he have just said it to my face?

My mom started up a new conversation with Daniel, and Alexander and Gabriella joined in. I stood there on the outside looking in, the letter still in my hands.

Then Daniel turned to face me. “So what do you think?”

"I cannot believe you! You're a liar just like your dad!" I burst out. But I couldn't help it. Standing there, watching him talk with Alexander just built up more anger inside of me.

"I'm sorry, ok? And by the way I didn't know about my dad and Alexander until yesterday. That's when my dad told me; and I figured out that Alexander was a vampire after he ran off with you on his back that one night." he explained.

"I know, I know. It’s just a lot for me to take in right now.”

“I completely understand.” Daniel replied.

“Thanks, and sorry for getting so mad at you like that. But why didn't you tell me before that you were going out with a vampire? Or that you're a werewolf?"

Alexander clenched his jaw, "What?" he asked in fury.

“How did you know that?” Gabriella asked me.

"It said so in the note Daniel just gave me.” I told her, keeping my mouth shut about the snooping part.

"Well why did you just tell everyone that?!? I told you to mind your own business, but you just couldn't, could you?!?" Gabriella shouted at me.

"Well sorry for being curious." I said sarcastically.

"You aren't forgiven." she replied, just as sarcastic as I was. "Did you move in to my house just to ruin my life? Or did you plan on trying to ruin your mom's new relationship too?"

I glared at her in response and stormed up to my room. I couldn't believe her! Well it was obvious that she was now out to get me. But two could play at that game. I sat down on my bed and sighed.


"I hate you!" I heard Gabriella scream as the sound of her stomping passed by my door.

"Well it isn't my fault that you decided to date that mutt!" Alexander shouted back in an angry rampage. I snickered under my breath. Although, I kind of felt bad for Daniel. It wasn't his fault that he was a werewolf.

I walked downstairs quietly after hearing the two angry vampires slam their doors shut. When I got to the living room I saw my mom was standing there looking at Daniel awkwardly.

"I'll take it from here mom." I told her as I walked up to them.

"Thanks." She smiled at me and walked up the stairs.

"I'm sorry for giving away your secret. I didn't think Alexander would explode like that." I apologized to him.

"It's ok. I've been dating Gabriella secretly for a month and a half. I think we'll be fine." he reassured me.

"Well that's good. Although, if I were you I would just break up with her. Did you see how angry she got? What a drama queen." I complained.

"Now that I think about it, she is kind of dramatic." he agreed. "Well I'm gonna go now." He walked out the door and I smiled to myself. Gabriella would soon regret going off on me like that.





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BurningRose said...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 4:57 pm
THIS. IS. PURE. BRILLIANCE!
 
4realwriter said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 7:32 pm
I love the way you developed your characters, they're so interesting. And I believe that they're nothing like Twilight
 
dragonfan said...
Dec. 14, 2009 at 11:58 am
you are an awesome writer and no matter wat people say ur writings are NOTHING like twilight (i think urs are better btw )
 
TeamJacobArchuleta replied...
Dec. 14, 2009 at 6:47 pm
Oh my gosh, thank you soooo much!!! That really means a lot to me, thank you!!!! :)
 
dragonfan replied...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 1:50 pm
no problem i really would love 2 read more u r a great writer i evan did a book report about ur story and i showed my teacher she LOVED it ;)
 
TeamJacobArchuleta replied...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 5:50 pm
Wow, that's awesome!!! Thank you soooo much! I'm so glad that you like it! :)
 
dragonfan replied...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 4:57 pm
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erika4964 said...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 4:48 pm
This was awesome are you going to wright the rest I can't wait the suspense is killing me.
 
TeamJacobArchuleta replied...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 8:03 pm
yeah, i actually have the entire story finished and on my computer. i've posted a couple more chapters on this site too, but it hasn't uploaded yet because it takes so long! i'm glad you like it though! :)
 
erika4964 replied...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 5:39 pm
So When did u say u were going to update them?????????????
 
TeamJacobArchuleta replied...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 5:51 pm
i actually haven't thought about that yet, i kinda forgot about this story, lol :) but i'll post a couple more right now! and plus, this is posted on this other website called quizilla .com :)
 
hawkfire said...
Nov. 2, 2009 at 3:52 pm
i kant wate to read more
 
JOED said...
Oct. 30, 2009 at 11:42 am
AWESOME STORY
 
Jillbabe said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 6:38 pm
gREAT sTORy
 
Michelle G. said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 3:09 pm
i have to read more, i love it
 
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